I need some help with rewriting sentences

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Singlemom  #139556  Tue, 20 Sep 05 04:46 AM

My 4th grade homework assignment is rewrite sentences. Below is the passage and after reading the passage you have to rewrite with correct spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and/or word choice.

1) Last year, my mother told me I could have any thing I wanted for christmas as long as it cost less than $ 50.00 I decided I wanted a pet. 2)We went to the local pet store. 3) I saw all kinds of fuzzy litel puppies. 4) They didn't seem my style, as they barked and licked my noze. 5) I walked passed all the cats. 6) Then I found the reptile section this intrigued me. 7) I thought about the lizards. 8) My brother needed new shoes because he tore them up playing baseball. 9) Then I saw her the perfect pet. 10) I know that the five foot boa constrictor was the pet for me. 11) My mother was horrifyed. 12) So, I told her about all the good points about having snake around the house. 13) The snake wouldn't leave fur and hare everywhere. 14) I would not have to take her for a walk. 15) I olny had to feed her once a month. 16) My mother decided that I could have the snake. 17) I named my snake molly. 18) she is an excellant pet. 19) I made a good decision choosing Molly as my pet.

 

 

 

  
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nona the brit  #139636  Tue, 20 Sep 05 09:22 AM

Hi singlemom,

We're don't do people's homework for for them! Most of the errors seem to be spelling so dig out your dictionary or even try your computer spellchecker...

Give it your best shot and post your efforts here and we'll help you with any problems.

  
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