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Anonymous  #203665  Mon, 06 Mar 06 12:16 PM

Hi,

I have a sentence below for your check-up for a proper semicolon use.

He wears shoes with socks, on expensive one; but I prefer loafers myself.

I think I read somewhere that you can not use a semicolon with "but"? 

  
paco2004  #203777  Mon, 06 Mar 06 06:50 PM
 Anonymous wrote:

Hi,

I have a sentence below for your check-up for a proper semicolon use.

He wears shoes with socks, on expensive one; but I prefer loafers myself.

I think I read somewhere that you can not use a semicolon with "but"? 

I suppose it should be: "He wears shoes with socks, an expensive one; but I prefer loafers myself."

You can use a semicolon to connect two sentences having a semantically intimate relation. All the sentences below given are correct as far as grammar concerns, but which one do you think best?
     (1) "He wears shoes with socks, an expensive one; but I prefer loafers myself."
     (2) "He wears shoes with socks, an expensive one, but I prefer loafers myself."
     (3) "He wears shoes with socks, an expensive one. But I prefer loafers myself."

paco
  
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Anonymous  #203901  Tue, 07 Mar 06 03:03 AM
Mr.Paco, as you have implied, I feel that Number one is the best choice because the semicolon there brings the two sentences together and establishes an intimate relationship as the writer originally intended the two sentences to be.  
  
Grammar Geek  #203933  Tue, 07 Mar 06 05:47 AM

Generally, you should not use a conjunction after a semicolon.

An unrelated comment - "an expensive one" is obviously singular, but both shoes and socks are plural. So the sentence has an error unrelated to the semicolon issue.

  
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Clive  #203937  Tue, 07 Mar 06 06:08 AM

Hi guys,

I'd like to add a general comment about semi-colons.

I tell students not to over-use them. I suggest no more than one per month. Otherwise, every page they write will be full of semi-colons in every sentence.

I think you should save your semi-colon for a big and important effect, rather than wasting it on talking about shoes and socks.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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paco2004  #203940  Tue, 07 Mar 06 06:47 AM
I guess the questioner picked up this sentence from Grammar Station . Here they are teaching how to punctuate sentences and phrases, but I agree they are making two serious or stupid mistakes here. The first one is the grammatical error that GG pointed out. The second one is the redundant use of the coordinator "but". A semicolon works either "and" or "but" per se. I have a feeling  the Grammar Station, as the whole, is a site useful to ESL students. But as far as this page is concerned, I have to admit the instruction there is not correct.

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Grammar Geek  #204114  Tue, 07 Mar 06 09:09 PM
Not to mention the error in logic. My husband's loafers are quite expensive. Smile [:)]
  
Anonymous  #432257  Fri, 19 Oct 07 01:40 AM
The semicolon is wrong there.  You need a comma because you are joining two independant clauses.  He wears shoes with socks, but I prefer loafers myself.  Or, you could have written: He wears shoes with socks; I prefer loafers myself.  The semicolon negates the need for a conjunction.
  
Grammar Geek  #432405  Fri, 19 Oct 07 03:10 PM
Anon, thanks for your contribution, but this post was over a year and a half old. Perhaps you can put your talents to more recent posts where the issue has not yet been resolved.
  
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