role model

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Anonymous  #522892  Wed, 04 Jun 08 11:30 AM
 kindly check my grammar,punctuation mark.thanks and god bless!

Who is your life's role model?

My life's role model is my sister.She's 2nd to the eldest in a brood of six girls in the family. I chose her not because she's my sister but because of what she

made us to be what am i right now.Before, she's only 22 years old then when she had a family of her own. She got 2 kids but the marriage failed due to unreconcilabe differences between them. Add to this maybe she's not yet capable financially and emotionally to raise a family.She worked abroad as a domestic helper to support her kids to school.Sometimes she cried because she truly misses her kids but she told us we must accept the realities of life.

She had helped our mother by giving us financial needs to finish our studies which she did not experience before.I know the sacrifices of my sister to get us what we wanted in life but i got pregnant. Despite of what i have done,she wholeheartedly accepted me and  managed to finish my studies with a degree in bachelor of nursing and gave her my diploma. To be strong, mature and be independent were the virtue i've learned from her

 

  
Anonymous  #523279  Thu, 05 Jun 08 09:33 AM
please i need to know what's wrong with my grammar,anyone who could help me?

Anonymous
 kindly check my grammar,punctuation mark.thanks and god bless!

Who is your life's role model?

My life's role model is my sister.She's 2nd to the eldest in a brood of six girls in the family. I chose her not because she's my sister but because of what she

made us to be what am i right now.Before, she's only 22 years old then when she had a family of her own. She got 2 kids but the marriage failed due to unreconcilabe differences between them. Add to this maybe she's not yet capable financially and emotionally to raise a family.She worked abroad as a domestic helper to support her kids to school.Sometimes she cried because she truly misses her kids but she told us we must accept the realities of life.

She had helped our mother by giving us financial needs to finish our studies which she did not experience before.I know the sacrifices of my sister to get us what we wanted in life but i got pregnant. Despite of what i have done,she wholeheartedly accepted me and  managed to finish my studies with a degree in bachelor of nursing and gave her my diploma. To be strong, mature and be independent were the virtue i've learned from her

 

 
  
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