Hi again,
I've suggested some changes.
Can you add any specific details of specific tasks you were very successful in, and that you are proud of?
Good luck with this, Clive
Subject: Salary Increment
Dear Sir, (better to use his actual name, it makes it more personal)
I have worked for this company for the last four years as an IT Support Engineer. During this time I have discharged my duties to the best of my abilities. I have been sincerely dedicated and have constantly worked hard. I have been committed to my job, and have sought to achieve management's objectives.
However, despite general appreciation of my work, I have not receieved any salary increment. My basic salary is still only 2500 (<<<< pounds, dollars, rupees? Say what). So, I now request you to consider my case for an increase to 4,000 and for promotion to System Engineer II.
As you are aware of my family circumstances, I hope you will take a favorable view and I feel confident that the management will be generous in recognizing and rewarding my merit.
I look forward to a favorable response from you. Thanks and best regards.
Yours Sincerely,
Manx