Hi,
I think this is pretty good. I've offered some suggestions.
Best wishes, Clive
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my interest in your current opening for an Electrical Engineer; therefore, please allow me to submit my résumé for your review. I am confident that I can make a valuable contribution to your organization’s future projects and initiatives.
I am a gas turbine operation engineer in rhe Wadi Hof gas turbine power station. I am responsible for the operation Gas Turbine power plant, including responding to sudden equipment failure and malfunction by conducting suitable troubleshooting analysis to return the equipment to operation quickly.
In addition, I have spent my summer training courses in different leading companies in the field of electrical engineering and its industrial applications, and that has gained me a lot of practical experience and improved both my understanding in my academic college studies and my technical skills.
My résumé contains details regarding my career accomplishments. I would welcome an opportunity for a personal interview to discuss your organization’s needs and the results you can expect from me in addressing those needs. I thank you in advance for your time and review of my qualifications.
Sincerely,
Eng/ Ahmed Zaki