The two puffy pillows, with matching texture, sits at corner side of bed; reminding the pillow fights I had with my best friend, who often came for chit chat and study.
Hi cute,
Good to see you back! As I advised you before, fragments can not make sentences but they can be used to add context to the main sentence body. i.e.
Standing in heavy rain at he bus stop waiting over half an hour for her friend who never showed up, Jennifer subsequently was sick with a fever.
In this sentence, I have used 4 fragments (or phrases) to create a mental image of her, standing anxiously in the rain, kept looking at her watch desspite the downpour.
It’s important that you understand we are not try to scrutinize your creativity. But if we don’t point out the mistakes and the improper usages, then we take away the purpose of the forum.
Your descriptive writing requires the essential components which are absent: logic, the vision to see as the readers, structure and the right adjectives at the right place.
This is how it came to me: Is the texture of the pillows important to the description? What texture? Colors and patterns ? Fluffy pillows – not puffy.
Puffy is her eyes when a girl was crying for hours after she found out her boyfriend has another girlfriend.
Pillows are usually not placed at corners of beds, [decorative cushions] are.