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Latest post Wed, Oct 8 2003 8:15 PM by sur. 4 replies.
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sur
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Wed, 08 Oct 03 08:15 PM
Hello Everyone,
Some time back i came accross a poem, thought I can share with you all.
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by Gerard Manley Hopkins, a Jesuit Priest-Poet in his poem,
"Thou art indeed just Lord, if I contend with Thee".
Thou art indeed just Lord if I contend with Thee.
But why do sinners' ways prosper
while all my endeavour end in failure and frustration.
Haven't I spent the whole of my life in your service?
Then why is this frustration to me?
If you are my enemy,
I can understand why you make my life so difficult.
But you are my friend and to understand
a friend making life difficult is beyond myself.
While even the plants around me are
full of leaves and flowers and fruits,
I bear nothing.
The birds build their nests but I don’t build anything.
I have become time's eunuch.
But for all that,
I will not
give up my faith in you.
My only prayer to you is
to send my roots rain again.
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any comments ? there will be many, but what i need is : your feelings more then 'critical' comments, especially on the title.
With love
Sur
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"unborn tomorrow
Dead yesterday
Why afraid ?
If today is fit ?"
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mystical_angel
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Thu, 16 Oct 03 05:26 PM
Thou art indeed just Lord if I contend with Thee.
But why do sinners' ways prosper
while all my endeavour end in failure and frustration.
Haven't I spent the whole of my life in your service?
Then why is this frustration to me?
If you are my enemy,
I can understand why you make my life so difficult.
But you are my friend and to understand
a friend making life difficult is beyond myself.
I like these two parts.they are very interesting ones!!!!
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~*~Live as if your were to die tomorrow.Learn as if you were to live forever~*~
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maj
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Thu, 16 Oct 03 05:39 PM
Sur, I love this poem. I think I even prefer the last two verses. How could this poem slip my mind?
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peter,
6 yr 37 days ago
Yeah that really strikes a chord, especially the Subject line
pieter,
6 yr 36 days ago
Nice poem, very nice ending.
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