I want to send a training report to Managing Director Help!

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Alex534  #242058  Sun, 02 Jul 06 10:25 AM

Hi,


 I want to send a email to our Managing Director about training report.  I havent sound  knowlege in grammar. Please help. I tried below please correct errors if any,




Dear Mr______,



I thank you for giving me an opportunity to join with you.

Pre-process training is very helpful to improve our communication and listening skills.

On the day 1, we introduced with and adjectives of the first letter of our name. This made interesting and we get acquainted each other. We played some games to improve our vocabulary skills.  Our trainer gave us a topic and tested our ability. He assessed and gave us the feed back.

On the day 2, we have learned the email etiquette. We have also learned the 50 states, people and culture of the United States. We have learned Articles, Nouns, Adjectives and Adverbs.

We have revisited the grammar and improved ourselves. Apart from that, we have learned

1. How to visualize our thoughts?

2. How to think logically?

3. How to listen and obey orders? And

4. How to behave in the corporate world?

Though, I have eight months of experienced in email support. I am learning a lot.

I thank again for this golden opportunity and I assure that I will perform well in the process training.

Yours sincerely,

Mark Alexander.

  
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nona the brit  #242810  Wed, 05 Jul 06 09:17 AM

Hi - I'm not sure what situation your training report refers to - is it giving your new employer some feedback on your induction training? Some parts are rather difficult to understand. Anyway, I've tidied it up for you.

Dear Mr.

Thank you for giving me an opportunity to join your company.

The Pre-process training was very helpful and improved my communication and listening skills.

On day 1, we introduced ourselves with a game involving coming up with adjectives starting with the first letter of our name. (I think this is what you mean). This was interesting and helped us get acquainted with each other. We played some games to improve our vocabulary skills.  Our trainer gave us a topic and tested our ability. He assessed us and gave us feedback.

On day 2, we learned email etiquette. We also learned about the 50 states, people and culture of the United States. We also worked on articles, nouns, adjectives and adverbs. We improved our grammar.

On the course, we also learned

1. How to visualize our thoughts.

2. How to think logically.

3. How to listen and obey orders.

4. How to behave in the corporate world.

Although I have eight months experience in email support, I learnt a lot.

I thank you again for this golden opportunity and I assure you that I will perform well in the process training.

Yours sincerely,

Mark Alexander.

  
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