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Nano  #269878  Wed, 20 Sep 06 02:58 PM

Is this sentence is right

 An attempt has been made to develop a component using plastics . Investigate their microstructure and mechanical properties.

An attempt has been made to develop a component using plastics . The  microstructure and mechanical properties will be investigated.

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Jrdavis  #269907  Wed, 20 Sep 06 03:59 PM
Both are "right" (or almost right) in that they are okay (but not perfect) English, but they different meanings, so it depends what you want.

The first one is a command.  You are telling someone to go investigate the properties of some set of things.  You might use this if you are writing an exam that other people will do.  It probably should be "Investigate its microstructure and mechanical properties" if there is only one item to be investigated.  "their"  is plural.

The second is a statement, written in passive.  This is the type of sentence one often finds in academic writing.  You could just as well say (in active voice) "This paper investigates its microstructure and mechanical properties".,  Or perhaps better
"This paper iinvestigates the microstructure and mechanical properties of a component developed using plastics"
  
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Nano  #270171  Thu, 21 Sep 06 01:33 AM
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