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Tung Quoc  #286706  Sat, 28 Oct 06 06:17 PM

Is (1) correct?If not, please correct it.

Enterprises which are repeatedly in deficit account for 20%.

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Marius Hancu  #286710  Sat, 28 Oct 06 06:20 PM
fine
same observations re the (some/all)

  
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Clive  #286733  Sat, 28 Oct 06 07:12 PM

Hi,

You seem to be using the term 'enterprise' a lot in contexts where I would prefer the term 'business'.

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Marius Hancu  #286734  Sat, 28 Oct 06 07:19 PM
Yes, enterprises is a bit pretentious.

Make some searches at Business Week or other sites and  learn the contexts.

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