Sentence analysis 9/12/06

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MrPedantic  #302518  Sun, 10 Dec 06 03:48 PM
 Hela wrote:

Now, would you please tell me how you would analyse "when" and its clause in the following:

The day will come when you will no longer remember my face.

All the best,

Hela

Hello Hela

I would myself take "when" as a relative adverb in that sentence (pace IK), and the clause as a whole as restrictive.

The version without the second "will" would sound ok to most speakers, I think. Reflecting on my previous post, though, and Marius's comment, it may be that while the first "will" houses "prediction", the second "will" houses "prediction" + "volition" on the speaker's part.

See you later,

MrP

  
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J Lewis  #302523  Sun, 10 Dec 06 04:08 PM
1) A day will come when you will no longer remember my face.
Is “when you will no longer...” a relative clause?
In my opinion, yes, it is. A day will come... what day? One in which you will no longer remember my face. When substitutes in which

2) Tell me when you will arrive.
Is this an indirect question? And “when you will arrive” a nominal clause? Again correct.
Tell me when you arrive means when you arrive, let me know, that's when you should tell me.
Tell me when you will arrive means tell me now when you expect to arrive. It's what you should tell me.
  
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Inchoateknowledge  #302547  Sun, 10 Dec 06 05:17 PM

Sorry, I have to eat humble pie.

Tell me when you will arrive.

when you will arrive is a nominal relative clause acting as the direct object of the verb: tell.

A relative pronoun can be replaced by an adjunct form for time: when.

Its use along with its antencedent some find tautologous.

Tell me (that) when you will arrive.

I live and learn.

I have always been of the opinion that a relative clause describes its antecedent.

There is not to be an antecedent for a relative clause.Surprise [:O]

  
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Hela  #302711  Mon, 11 Dec 06 07:13 AM

Thanks to all of you. Smile [:)] and have a nice week.

  
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Inchoateknowledge  #303567  Wed, 13 Dec 06 10:42 PM
 Hela wrote:

Thanks to all of you. Smile [:)] and have a nice week.

Hello

Once more Smile [:)]

1) A day will come when you no longer remember my face. 

when you will no longer remember my face = temporal adjunct -- describes the action, not the noun (day),  not an adjectival clause (not relative clause)

A relative clause cannot describe a verb (come), only nouns.

compare

I remember the day when we played in the garden.

when = relative adverb

when we played in the garden = adjectival clause = relative clause, describes the noun, day.

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Tell me when you will arrive

 

when = adverb and modifies arrive (verb)

when you will arrive = temporal adjunct clause, also the object of tell

me = indirect object.

 

 

  
Goodman  #303596  Thu, 14 Dec 06 12:23 AM

Here is how I see it from my angle.

When – is a time related pronoun; just like [where] and [which] are pronouns in most usage. I think we can  agree on that.

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"A day will come when you will no longer remember my face" can be interpreted this way:

[There will be a time] when you will no longer remember my face. If it's true, [when] is a pronoun.

 

I have just built a vacation home which is near Yosemite National Park

I still remember the time when my father took me to the park

The same cabin where we had a family picture taken 30 years ago still stands.

 

 I am slowly pouring water in a cake mix, and I said, tell me [when]. This means, let me know at the moment you want me to stop pouring.  

 

I know him from way back when. = Long time ago.

 

I changed his diapers when he was a baby. = [when] in this case appears to be a conjunction to me.

 

The label of the function changes with different context. That's my two cents...

  
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Inchoateknowledge  #303727  Thu, 14 Dec 06 09:56 AM

Hello

'"A day will come when you will no longer remember my face' can be interpreted this way:

[There will be a time] when you will no longer remember my face. If it's true, [when] is a pronoun."

Although the meaning remained intact, you have changed the syntax here, and therefore the syntactical function of the connector has changed.

"A day will come when you will no longer remember my face"

When here modifies the verb, come, and not the subject, a day.

A pronoun cannot replace and refer to a verb. So, when is an adverb connector

Compare

There will be a time when you will no longer remember my face.

time = when = pronoun

Here, the pronoun introducing the nominal relative clause refers to a time (when you will no longer remember my face)

 

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J Lewis  #303746  Thu, 14 Dec 06 10:36 AM
1) A day will come when you no longer remember my face.

When you will no longer remember my face cannot be a time clause. If does not tell us when a day will come; days come all the time! It tells us which day will come.
If it were a time clause, we could invert the sentence: "When you will no longer remember my face, a day will come". This obviously makes no sense.
  
Inchoateknowledge  #303756  Thu, 14 Dec 06 11:07 AM

"A day, when you will no longer remember my face, will come."

I cry uncle

F..kSad [:(]

I hope the day will come when I no longer f..k up identifying the sentence elements.Big Smile [:D]

End of story, I hope Wink [;)]

  
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