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Hela  #302260  Sat, 09 Dec 06 08:11 PM
Dear teachers,

1) A day will come when you will no longer remember my face.
Is “when you will no longer...” a relative clause?

2) Tell me when you will arrive.
Is this an indirect question? And “when you will arrive” a nominal clause?

All the best,
Hela
  
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Marius Hancu  #302272  Sat, 09 Dec 06 08:31 PM
I think tense simplification in the subordinates could be applied in both cases:

1) A day will come when you no longer remember my face.

2) Tell me when you arrive.

(See Swan, Practical English Usage, tense simplification)

  
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Inchoateknowledge  #302274  Sat, 09 Dec 06 08:53 PM

A day will come when you will no longer remember my face.

when here is a conjunction word
A relative clause is introduced by a relative pronoun. When is not a relative pronoun. consequently, there is no relative clause in the sentence

Tell me when you will arrive.

yes, the object is a noun clause used adverbially.

Indirect question, yes

  
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Hela  #302278  Sat, 09 Dec 06 09:05 PM

Marius, please, would you tell me what Swan says about these cases? I haven't got the book at hand, unfortunately.

I'm glad to see that my analysis of the second sentence is correct. Smile [:)]

But in the first sentence, isn't "when" a relative adverb? It can't be a conjunction of time since we have the future in the subordinating clause.

Any comments?

  
Inchoateknowledge  #302281  Sat, 09 Dec 06 09:09 PM

That does not mean your second sentence analysis is correct, but that we are of the same opinion.Wink [;)]

when is an adverb and conjunction, but not a relative pronoun.

In modern English there are five relative pronouns: that, which, who, whom, and whose.

  
Marius Hancu  #302283  Sat, 09 Dec 06 09:13 PM
>Marius, please, would you tell me what Swan says about these cases? I haven't got the book at hand, unfortunately.

I only have time to defend my arguments, sorry.
  
Inchoateknowledge  #302285  Sat, 09 Dec 06 09:17 PM


1) A day will come when you will no longer remember my face.

2) Tell me when you will arrive.

 
Tense simplification is a non sequitur here.
This is used when from the main verb it is obvious what time the speaker is referring to.
 
A day will come when you (will) no longer remember my face.
 
tense simplification here means you can omit will in the sub clause of sentence 1, but not in your second sentence.
 
 
  
  
Marius Hancu  #302289  Sat, 09 Dec 06 09:27 PM
Not sure why I saw a future in the main at 2. Wrong.
  
Inchoateknowledge  #302295  Sat, 09 Dec 06 09:57 PM

Hello Marius

Neither sentence is incorrect.

Tense simplification means the future tense is not always unnecessary in sub clauses, and not  that it is always wrong to use it.

  
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