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Kristar  #498108  Tue, 08 Apr 08 03:17 PM
Would someone please read through my text? I have marked the three last words in the last sentence because it sounds wrong.  

 In addition, GPR30 dependent transactivation of the Epidermal growth factor receptor, through activation of matrix metalloproteinase, by the βγ subunits, and subsequently cleavage and release of membrane bound heparin bound epidermal growth factor, has also been demonstrated.  Because EGFR activates ERK1/2 and, in turn, induce expression of the proto oncogen c-fos (16), and other genes involved in cell proliferation, GPR30’s role in cancinogenisis has been questioned.

 

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Grammar Geek  #498137  Tue, 08 Apr 08 03:56 PM
This is barely understandable to someone not in medical research, but try it this way instead: 

In addition, GPR30-dependent transactivation of the Epidermal growth factor receptor, through activation of matrix metalloproteinase, by the βγ subunits and subsequently cleavage and release of membrane-bound, heparin-bound epidermal growth factor, has also been demonstrated.  GPR30’s role in cancinogenisis has been questioned because EGFR activates ERK1/2 and, in turn, induces expression of the proto oncogen c-fos (16), and other genes involved in cell proliferation, .

 

  
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Kristar  #498657  Wed, 09 Apr 08 07:06 PM

Thank you! You are an angel!

  
Anonymous  #501537  Wed, 16 Apr 08 05:01 PM

turn the tap it is true or not

  
Clive  #501544  Wed, 16 Apr 08 05:12 PM

Hi,

Say 'Turn the tap on' or 'Turn the tap off'. 

Please start a new thread for  a new question.

Thank you, Clive Smile

  
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