Hi, everyone. I came across a sentence in a test this morning, which goes, "The first twenty to thirty pages of James Joyce would give any reader a big headache. Fortunately, the rest pages are not hopelessly difficult." The test taker is required to copy the original sentence with errors corrected if there's any. I will change it to "The first twenty to thirty pages of
the work by James Joyce would give any reader a big headache. Fortunately, the rest of the pages are not hopelessly difficult." But I am not sure of this revision. I remember
Ulysses---the whole of it---is a big headache, so I will not say "The first twenty to thirty pages of Ulysses by James Joyce would give any reader a big headache. Fortunately, the rest of the pages are not hopelessly difficult." Have you got a better revision?
Thanks.