Sentence proofreading

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ppan  #146218  Sun, 09 Oct 05 07:39 PM
Hi,

Could someone please help proofread the following sentence?

"In summary, becoming a good leader is a life time learning experience. I am fortunate to have a head start in a very competitive and successful company. I have been looking forward to expanding my experience to lead larger projects and manage multiple teams."

thanks in advance,

/P

  
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MrPedantic  #146275  Sun, 09 Oct 05 11:29 PM

Hello Ppan

Here's my suggestion:

"In summary, becoming a good leader is a life-long learning experience. I am fortunate to have had a head start in a very competitive and successful company. I am looking forward to expanding my experience by leading larger projects and managing multiple teams."

Other members may have a better solution, though!

MrP

  
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