Is this sentence puctuated correctly?

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Futurehuman11  #489129  Sat, 15 Mar 08 06:03 AM

...where the mean men conspire in their halls of stone to take over the world.

  
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Marius Hancu  #489193  Sat, 15 Mar 08 11:42 AM
 I think it's fine. Commas around "in their halls of stone" would only slow it down, but are possible.
  
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