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kk  +  142887 Thu, 29 Sep 05 08:56 AM 
Hello,

I am not sure whether the three sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics.
Can you give me a hand with checking them
Thank you for your help.

1. Workers with great literacy skills, which enable them to easily assimilate the depth of knowledge and clearly write their view on specific issues. chemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />>>

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2. Reading skills can decide whether a work can soak up lots of knowledge in a short time and help him to attain his goal of becoming a distinguished executive in the cutthroat business world. >>

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3 It is inevitable that consumers with a bad temper complain about a defective product in person, the situation which might block them to deal with their complaints. After all, the more anger consumers get the less problems they can solve. >>

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Clive  +  143100 Thu, 29 Sep 05 11:09 PM

Hi,

Here are some suggestions. I've tried to change as little as possible.

1. Workers (this sentence has no main verb! Workers need...? ...lack...?)  excellent literacy skills, which will enable them to easily assimilate in-depth knowledge and to state their views clearly on specific issues.

2. Reading skills can decide whether a worker will be able to soak up lots of knowledge in a short time, and can help him to attain his goal of becoming a distinguished executive in the cutthroat business world.

3 It is inevitable that bad-tempered consumers will complain about a defective product in person, yet this situation may prevent them from having their complaints dealt with. After all, the more anger consumers show, the fewer problems they will be able to resolve.

Best wishes, Clive


 
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