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WANG CHUN  #205838  Mon, 13 Mar 06 07:14 PM

Hello

I don’t know whether these sentences conform to the usage of English.  If you find something wrong in Grammar and semantics, help me correct them. Thank you for your help

1. According to my learning experience, it is reasonable to express the best way of learning is to discuss something with others whose views contradict our own. The fact is that we learn nothing from others whose ideas we share.

2. Lin Hwai Min has been discussing his dance style with critics whose ideas of performing arts are different from him.

3.What causes basketball fans to buy NIKE sneakers is that putting on them can have as brilliant basketball skills as these NBA players.

 

  
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davkett  #205868  Mon, 13 Mar 06 08:59 PM

Consider these revisions.--

1. According to my experience,  the best way to learn is to discuss something with others whose views contradict your own.  The fact is, we learn nothing from others whose ideas we share.

2. Lin Hwai Min has been discussing his dance style with critics whose ideas about the performing arts are different from his.

3.What causes basketball fans to buy NIKE sneakers is the expectation that when they put them on they will have the same brilliant skills as the NBA players.

  
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