sentence rephrasing

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#501455 Wed, 16 Apr 08 02:01 PM

Interestingly, there is a specific type of child abduction can have negative psychological effects on individuals only marginally involved in it, and that is infant abduction.

Can this sentence be rephrased as follows? Please advise.

Interestingly, if there is a specific type of child abduction which can have negative psychological effects on individuals only marginally involved in it is infant abduction.

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Clive

#501549 Wed, 16 Apr 08 05:26 PM

Hi,

Interestingly, there is a specific type of child abduction which/that can have negative psychological effects on individuals only marginally involved in it, and that is infant abduction.

Can this sentence be rephrased as follows? Please advise.

No, say it this way. Interestingly, ~~if there is~~ a specific type of child abduction which can have negative psychological effects on individuals only marginally involved in it is infant abduction.

Best wishes, Clive

Clive

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RayH

#501569 Wed, 16 Apr 08 06:23 PM

Anonymous

Interestingly, there is a specific type of child abduction can have negative psychological effects on individuals only marginally involved in it, and that is infant abduction.
Can this sentence be rephrased as follows? Please advise.
Interestingly, if there is a specific type of child abduction which can have negative psychological effects on individuals only marginally involved in it is infant abduction.

Here's my take on rephrasing your sentence:
Interestingly, if there is a specific type of child abduction which can have negative psychological effects on individuals only marginally involved, in it is infant abduction.

RayH

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Clive

#501633 Thu, 17 Apr 08 12:14 AM

Hi,

Yes, but to my mind 'If there is . . it is . . ' introduces at least the possibility that there may be some slight doubt about it in the speaker's mind. The structure can, of course, also be used simply as a form of emphasis. But in some contexts, at least some ambiguity may remain.

Best wishes, Clive

Clive