Sentence Structure

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#98967 Fri, 13 May 05 03:28 PM

Kindly advise me on the structure of this sentence: "They provide important clues as to what you are doing right and doing wrong".

Should this read like "They provide important clues as to what you are doing right and what you are doing wrong"

or

"They provide important clues as to what you are doing right and wrong"

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Mister Micawber

#98970 Fri, 13 May 05 03:35 PM

All are possible, but I prefer your last suggestion, as the most succinct and efficient.

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