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yohooo8

#98433 Thu, 12 May 05 12:37 AM

"Let me know if your roommate feels not comfortable to travel with me as a stranger."

Is this sentence right>?

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MrPedantic

#98435 Thu, 12 May 05 12:51 AM

Hello Y8

I would say:

'Let me know if your roommate feels uncomfortable about travelling with me, as we don't know each other.'

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yohooo8

#98456 Thu, 12 May 05 01:43 AM

Thanks.
As my point of view, i feel like your way of saying it is much better than mine. So what is the possible area of English I should work on in this case? I have been living in U.S for more than 12 years already, and I am not confidence on writing my English sentences, because I know that I am not writing the perfect way, just like the one i wrote up there. Is any suggestions for me?

yohooo8

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MrPedantic

#98741 Thu, 12 May 05 11:05 PM

Hello yohooo8

One way would be to link the study of English to some activity you enjoy.

If you tell me one or two things you like to do in your spare time, I'll see if I can think of a link.

MrP

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yohooo8

#100223 Mon, 16 May 05 08:47 PM

I love running and biking, traveling places.

yohooo8

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