Sentence Structure Q

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Thedynamix  #485059  Tue, 04 Mar 08 11:15 PM
Please let me know if the following sentence is valid and good! sorry the font is so big, I couldn't re-size for some reason. Thanks guys

 

 

The three tier  client/server architecture was introduced in the 1990’s to overcome the shortcomings prevalent in the two tier architecture.

 

  
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Clive  #485067  Tue, 04 Mar 08 11:40 PM

HI,

Seems OK to me.

I'd hyphenate 'two-tier' and 'three-tier'.

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Thedynamix  #486166  Fri, 07 Mar 08 05:18 PM
Rather than a new topic, could someone please have a look and possibly optimise the following short paragraph:

 

Security enthusiasts define the three fundamental aspects of security as people, protocol and security/encryption. Providing all three of these aspects are continually evaluated and adhered to, the less chance there is of an attack. The recent incident whereby confidential social security details were shipped via courier to Government offices, but never received, clearly highlights the people and/or protocol aspects to be at fault.

I'm particularly wary of the end part.. 

 

Thank you as always EF!

 

  
Thedynamix  #486181  Fri, 07 Mar 08 06:04 PM
 Please, anyone??
  
Clive  #486224  Fri, 07 Mar 08 08:36 PM

Hi,

Security enthusiasts define the three fundamental aspects of security as people, protocol and security/encryption. Providing all three of these aspects are continually evaluated and adhered to, the less chance there is of an attack. The recent incident whereby confidential social security details were shipped via courier to Government offices, but never received, clearly highlights the people and/or protocol aspects as being at fault.

Please start a new thread next time.Smile

Best wishes, Clive

  
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