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deanpijin  #247241  Thu, 20 Jul 06 06:31 AM

Would somebody please help me with my sentences?

1- The X (name of a society) represents pharmaceutical companies which engage in the manufacturing, trading, marketing and distribution sectors of the industry,administers a code of conduct as a guide for industry on advertising of prescription medications.

2- Y (name of a society ), which represents research-based pharmaceutical companies who discover, develop and manufacture prescription medicines, administers a code of conduct for promotional practice.

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Dean

  
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Clive  #247243  Thu, 20 Jul 06 06:35 AM

Hi,

1- The X (name of a society) represents pharmaceutical companies which engage in the manufacturing, trading, marketing and distribution sectors of the industry,administers a code of conduct as a guide for industry on advertising of prescription medications.

1- The X (name of a society) represents pharmaceutical companies which engage in the manufacturing, trading, marketing and distribution sectors of the industry, and administers a code of conduct as a guide for the industry on the advertising of prescription medications.

2- Y (name of a society ), which represents research-based pharmaceutical companies who discover, develop and manufacture prescription medicines, administers a code of conduct for promotional practice.

2- The Y (name of a society ), which represents research-based pharmaceutical companies who discover, develop and manufacture prescription medicines, administers a code of conduct for promotional practice.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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deanpijin  #247251  Thu, 20 Jul 06 07:36 AM

Thanks Clive.

Regards,

Dean

  
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