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Bsss10  #369182  Wed, 23 May 07 05:10 AM

Hello,

I don’t know whether these sentences conform to the usage of English. 

If you find something wrong in Grammar and semantics,

help me correct them. Thank you for your help.

These middle-class families have been disappearing in the recent years and are reduced to low-incoming ones. With the fewer and fewer middle-class families existing, M society structure has been already established.

  
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Clive  #369191  Wed, 23 May 07 05:56 AM

Hi,

These middle-class families have been disappearing in the recent years and are reduced to low-incoming ones. With the fewer and fewer middle-class families existing, M society structure has been already established.

These middle-class families have been transforming in recent years into low-income ones. With fewer and fewer middle-class families remaining, M society structure has been already established.

Does 'M society' mean middle-class society? Anyway, I don't undertstand the part in red at all. Try to say it in another way.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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