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Fizzi  #386812  Mon, 02 Jul 07 01:38 AM

Hi all,

Would somebody please help me with the English?

1. My wife's application for extension of study leave has been approved by the university to  15. August. 2007.  As I am accompanying my wife while she is completing her study, I would like to apply for an extension of  unpaid leave until the same date.

2. My kid is bleeding when he does the wee.

 

Regards,

Fizzi

  
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Clive  #386813  Mon, 02 Jul 07 01:53 AM

Hi Fizzi,

1. My wife's application for a study leave extension until 15th. August 2007 has been approved by the university.  As I wish to accompany her while she is completing her studies, I would like to apply for an extension of  unpaid leave until the same date.

2. My kid has blood in his urine.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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Fizzi  #386898  Mon, 02 Jul 07 08:54 AM

Hi Clive,

Thanks for your suggestions.

Do you think it is ok if I add "continue" in the sentence.

"My wife's application for a study leave extension until 15th. August 2007 has been approved by the university.  As I wish to continue accompany her while she is completing her studies, I would like to apply for an extension of  unpaid leave until the same date"

Regards,

Fizzi

  
Clive  #387088  Mon, 02 Jul 07 04:03 PM

Hi again,

Do you think it is ok if I add "continue" in the sentence. Yes, that's OK.

"My wife's application for a study leave extension until 15th. August 2007 has been approved by the university.  As I wish to continue to accompany her while she is completing her studies, I would like to apply for an extension of  unpaid leave until the same date."

Best wishes, Clive

  
Fizzi  #387251  Tue, 03 Jul 07 01:04 AM

Thanks Clive Smile [:)]

Regards,

Fizzi

  
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