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#403842 Mon, 13 Aug 07 07:10 AM

Dear all,

Would somebody please comments the sentences?
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1.The photo of the box with the miselading claim does clearly appear on the advertisment and it can be read by consumers and may mislead them.

2. I hope this discussion will lead to better outcomes for both parties, since the monitoring of the compliance of advertisements with regulation is quite challenging for example in the case of advertisement "A".

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#403866 Mon, 13 Aug 07 08:18 AM

I think I would do this:

1.The photo of the box with the misleading claim clearly appears in the advertisement; it can be read by consumers and may mislead them.

2. I hope this discussion will lead to better outcomes for both parties, since monitoring the compliance of advertisements with regulations is quite challenging, as with advertisement "A".

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#403911 Mon, 13 Aug 07 10:16 AM

Thanks Mister Micawber,
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