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Guest
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Thu, 27 Jan 05 07:57 AM
Hello,
Please look at the following sentences. If I make any mistake, please correct for me.
Thanks.
1. I get tongue-tied as teacher ask a question in class and I can't answer.
2. I feel a lot of anxiety because I have to get my work done this weekend.
3. When I attend the party, I just sit there and don't mingle with others at the party.
4. He is a responsible person so everyone is raving about.
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Mister Micawber
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Thu, 27 Jan 05 02:48 PM
They look pretty good, Guest. Only minimal changes:
1. I get tongue-tied, as teacher ask a question in class and I can't answer.
2. I feel a lot of anxiety because I have to get my work done this weekend.
3. When I attend a party, I just sit there and don't mingle with others.
4. He is a responsible person, so everyone is raving about him.
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Sand
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Thu, 27 Jan 05 05:58 PM
Perhaps I am intruding, but the sentence 1., I think, should be:
I get tongue-tied when the teacher asks a question in class and I can't answer.
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caduca,
4 yr 302 days ago
Sand's version looks right
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Mister Micawber
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Fri, 28 Jan 05 02:39 PM
You're both right. I'm a lousy proofreader (witness the thread title-- which I shall now repair).
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