I need to have few sentences checked

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racer121  #547137  Sun, 27 Jul 08 10:44 PM
Hello there

I have some sentences that I want to check if they are gramatically correct and whether if they convey what I want to say or not. if not true, give me suggestions.


 1-check the costs, and compare it to your budget.
2- you have to buy new clothes that suits the weather
3- should think about preparations before the trip.
4- what makes a vacation perfect? And, .. etc
5- ask him to think of places for vacation and take into account his opinions and suggestions.

I guess you know what I am intending to say.


Thanks in advance
  
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Clive  #547154  Mon, 28 Jul 08 12:10 AM
Hi,

Welcome to the Forum.

I have some sentences that I want to check if they are gramatically correct and whether if they convey what I want to say or not. if not true, give me suggestions.


 1-check the cost, and compare it to your budget.
2-
you have to buy new clothes that suit the weather.
3- You
should think about preparations before the trip.
4-
what makes a vacation perfect? And, .. etc
5-
ask him to think of places for vacation and take into account his opinions and suggestions.

I've made a few edits. In addition, you need capital letters at the start.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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