Sentences that need correction

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Nicky Couture

#284962 Tue, 24 Oct 06 08:02 AM

Please help me correct the following sentences. (They might need a few tweaks here and there.) Big Smile [:D]

Topher ruined Tammy's dress. Good thing he's a cute little puppy and can get away with it. Or at least, I hope so!

All I'm asking for is: Let me know 24 hours in advance, people!

I really would like some cotton candy, or maybe just some non-sticky cotton candy!

Also, when using etc. should it be all in caps? Like the following:

I enjoy, fishing, hunting, biking, ETC.

- Thanks in advance for helping!

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LanguageLover

#284964 Tue, 24 Oct 06 08:15 AM

Your sentences sound good to me, my only adjustment would be the second one.

All I'm asking for is to let me know 24 hours in advance, people!

And there is no need for capitalised "etc.", use small letters.

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Anonymous

#293599 Wed, 15 Nov 06 07:42 PM

We could not identify with there perception because their figures was not even in the ball path.

nona the brit

#293605 Wed, 15 Nov 06 07:58 PM

their perception

figures were

ball park.

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