Sentences questions

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WANG CHUN  #201909  Tue, 28 Feb 06 07:11 PM
Hi 
I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.
If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.
Thank you very much.

1.It seems extreme to state that those who are advocate of an idea have strong criticism on it.

2. Taiwan’s Big Brother Chiang Kai- shek made martial law to stabilize his regime, eliminate his opponents, and suppress any opposition of groups. Is it possible for Chiang Kai-shek to make an objection against martial law?

3. All over the world capitalists argue global free-market economy in order for them to accumulate a great wealth as much as possible. Does anyone see any capitalist says that free market economy is unfair policy because it enables the rich to become richer at expense of the poor?

4.Now that enterprisers benefit greatly from global free-market economy, they no longer make a self criticism whether it forces exploited laborers to live on the brink of destitution.   

 

 

  
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Clive  #201942  Tue, 28 Feb 06 10:22 PM

Hi,

1.It seems extreme to state that those who are advocates of an idea have strong criticism of it.

2. Taiwan’s Big Brother Chiang Kai- shek made martial law to stabilize his regime, eliminate his opponents, and suppress any group opposition. Was it possible for Chiang Kai-shek to make an objection against martial law?

3. All over the world ,capitalists argue in vafour of a global free-market economy in order for them to accumulate as much great wealth as possible. Has anyone see nany capitalist say that a free market economy is an unfair policy because it enables the rich to become richer at the expense of the poor?

4.Now that entrepreneurs are benefiting greatly from the global free-market economy, they no longer ask themselves whether it forces exploited laborers to live on the brink of destitution.   

Best wishes, Clive

  
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