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adonis

#147463 Thu, 13 Oct 05 01:00 PM

Hello,

I am not sure whether these sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics.
Can you give me a hand with checking them
Thank you for your help.

1. What is the disadvantage of a quick decision is that it always ignores other important factors or aspects

2. I immediately followed my intuition to decide to go to chemas-microsoft-com:office Tongue Tied [:S] marttags" />lace>Miamilace> for study tour without considering some vital factors, such as lace>Miamilace>’s weather, social and cultural background. When I arrive in lace>Miamilace>, I found out the majority of the residents in lace>Miamilace> speak Spanish rather than English.

3. Not to stay up late at night is beneficial to my health.

4. Not only does regular exercise speed up metabolism but also it can strengthen immune system which prevent my body from coming down with virus or disease.

5. I hope I can take my family on a round-the-world-trip.

adonis

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Grammar

pieanne

#147465 Thu, 13 Oct 05 01:12 PM

1. the disadvantage of a quick decision is that it often ignores some important factors or aspects.

3. Not to stay up late at night is beneficial to my health. I'd say "not staying up late"

4. Not only does regular exercise speed up the metabolism, but it can also strengthen the immune system that prevents/preventing my body from coming down with a virus or disease.

5. sounds fine

That's what I would say, but maybe I'm wrong... (I know, I didn't check n°2...)