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#208052 Tue, 21 Mar 06 10:31 AM

Hello,

I am not sure whether these sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics.
Can you give me a hand with checking them
Thank you for your help.

1.I share the view that students who cram up contents in the textbooks learn very little. The reason is that students don’t know what they learn if they only memorize facts in the textbooks. As a matter of fact, students should acquire the ideas, trends, and concepts behind these facts in the textbooks in order to enhance the depth of their knowledge.

2. It is only when teachers tell their students the reason Hitler killed six million Jews was that he attempted to achieve his dream of creating a pure Aryan race that they can completely understand why people see Hitler as a evil symbol.

3.Teachers should try to explain English grammar as clear as possible, enabling students to use the correct rule of English grammar in their writing.

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Clive

#208084 Tue, 21 Mar 06 02:24 PM

Hi,

1.I share the view that students who soak up the contents of textbooks learn very little. The reason is that they do not understand what they are learning if they only memorize facts from books. Students should acquire the ideas and concepts behind these facts in order to enhance the depth of their knowledge.

2. Students can completely understand why people see Hitler as a evil symbol only when their teachers tell them the reason Hitler killed six million Jews was that he was attempting to achieve his dream of creating a pure Aryan race.

3.Teachers should try to explain English grammar as clearly as possible, thus enabling students to use correct grammatical rules in their writing.

Best wishes, Clive