Which sentences would be the better to write in a C.V.?

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COUME

#199876 Wed, 22 Feb 06 07:25 PM

Hello,

I have dilemna between 2 sentences...

Which one would be the best to write in a C.V. in your opinion?

1 - Attained "business-to-business" service excellence by dealing effectively and confidently with conflictual situations on a daily basis, using professional, polite and clear telephone manner and letter writing skills demonstrating a high communication ability.

2 - Delivered first-class "business-to-business" service excellence by dealing effectively and confidently with conflictual situations on a daily basis, using professional, polite and clear telephone manner and letter writing skills demonstrating a high communication ability.

I am not sure about the first one as it might convey the idea that it took me time to be able to deliver a high quality service but it is only my understanding as a non-English native...

So what do you think?

Thanks in advance for your tips/advice/corrections

Cheers,
Ludovic

P.S.: If you spotted any mistake above, do not hesitate to let me know Smile [:)]

COUME

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Robyn Terri

#200203 Thu, 23 Feb 06 03:45 PM

Is conflictual a word? My spell check dosn't think so and I can't find it in my dictionary.

Robyn Terri

Joined on Sat, Apr 16 2005

Western Australia

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Words don't have meanings, meanings have words.

COUME

#200223 Thu, 23 Feb 06 04:58 PM

Erm, that's interesting...

I checked this word @ [link] but I now checked in our dictionary at work.... and I can't find it there...

I could find there conflicting ... Should I use this one instead??

What do you reckon?

Cheers,
Ludo

COUME

#200227 Thu, 23 Feb 06 05:24 PM

COUME wrote:

2 - Delivered first-class "business-to-business" service excellence by dealing effectively and confidently with conflictual situations on a daily basis, using professional, polite and clear telephone manner and letter writing skills demonstrating a high communication ability.

I just noticed in my first post, that I made a mistake... The "excellence" word should not be there so the 2 paragraphs should be as follow:

1 - Attained "business-to-business" service excellence by dealing effectively and confidently with conflictual situations on a daily basis, using professional, polite and clear telephone manner and letter writing skills demonstrating a high communication ability.

2 - Delivered first-class "business-to-business" service by dealing effectively and confidently with conflictual situations on a daily basis, using professional, polite and clear telephone manner and letter writing skills demonstrating a high communication ability.

COUME

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