Hi, I have to send an e-mail to get informations on a job. I just want you to check my English. Also I don't know how to finish the letter; I haven't written a formal letter in years!
thanks.
Dear X,
My name is C.T. and I am a student in foreign languages in Paris. I am looking for an internship to conclude my three-year degree and I would be very interested in being an intern in the (name of the company) French departement. I e-mailed Mr Y, who gave me your e-mail and advised me to contact you. I would greatly appreciate it if you could please send me any information you have regarding applying for an internship.
[Don't forget to include your contact information]
Is there a reason you don't use capital letters? They are a necessary part of English.