please proofread this for me >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

   >>>>>  Are you have a idols now ? well i'm not and ,in fact ,i do not know the definition of idol ,i know that many young people are desperate to take up all their time with their idol ,however i deem that idol should classify by fine and harmful.

as a student, i think we should to focus on our studies,especially as we now in from 4 ,the HKCEE is just around the corner, some teachers keep telling us that seemingly far away, actually close at hand and so write some short essay every week 

ideem that a good idols like a good conductor ,the best idols should give us a goos view of life and teacher us that when we meet difficulties should not escape challenges ,can not lose  confidence ought not to fearfal of failure ,in my opinion idol would affect the development of our personality on the other hand ,if your idols lrt you have to sacrifice precious hars to collected idol poster or take up all your time yo listen to his new pop song ,it would cause endless bad effect between us and our study or friend ,and ,in the end ,is it all worth it ? for me ,the answear is no .on the whole,injudiciously choose our idol could ruin your view of life ,especially as regards our acadenic results ,that is why .i say idol should classify two group >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

please gine me some view and advice for my writing <<<if the full mark is 10 ,which mark i can get