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Ben9108  #161173  Mon, 21 Nov 05 07:10 PM

Re: Reply the addition of drain pipes

Referring to your verbal site instruction dated 12 Nov 2005 concerning to the additional drain pipes for the air conditioning units, the installation problem of the drain pipe have been solved with main contractor. The material for the drain pipes have been kept in stock after liaison with our supplier.

On the other hand, the installation of drain pipes are not included in our contract. In order to keep the tight progress, the installation will be commenced since a written confirmation or instruction for the additional works have been issued to us.

If you have any queries, please free feel to contact me at tel:68680000000

Your faithfully,

 

Ben

  
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Ben9108  #161174  Mon, 21 Nov 05 07:12 PM
help me to check
  
Clive  #161227  Mon, 21 Nov 05 10:43 PM

Hi Ben,

I made some changes. Check that I haven't accidentally changed your meaning, particularly in the second half.

When you finish this work, please come and help me with my drain-pipes, OK?

Best wishes, Clive 

Re: The addition of drain pipes

Referring to your verbal site instruction, dated 12 Nov 2005, concerning the additional drain pipes for the air conditioning units, the installation problems have been solved with the main contractor. The material for the drain pipes has been kept in stock after liaison with our supplier.

On the other hand, the installation of drain pipes is not included in our contract. In order to keep to our tight progress schedule, the installation will commence now since a written confirmation or instruction for the additional works has been issued to us.

If you have any queries, please free feel to contact me at tel:68680000000

  
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Ben9108  #161268  Tue, 22 Nov 05 01:40 AM

the installation will commence (why use active voice, the installation cannot be commenced by itself.)

 

  
Clive  #161302  Tue, 22 Nov 05 04:23 AM

Hi,

A wedding can begin. A party can start. An installation can commence.

Clive

  
Ben9108  #161326  Tue, 22 Nov 05 05:12 AM

Thanks clive to help me.

But i still misunderstand.

Ex. An installation is completed  (passive voice)

      An installation will be proceeded (passive voice)

 

Are the sentenances correct in voice?

 

Ben

  
Clive  #161328  Tue, 22 Nov 05 05:17 AM

Hi,

Ex. An installation is completed  (passive voice) OK, fine.

      An installation will be proceeded (passive voice) No. Some verbs can not be used in the passive. 'An installation will proceed' is fine.

English is fun, isn't it?

Clive

  
Ben9108  #161346  Tue, 22 Nov 05 06:50 AM

Clive

Have any grammerical explantion or rules for my understanding?

 

Ben

  
Ben9108  #161363  Tue, 22 Nov 05 08:20 AM

clive

Could you tell me where the verbs in passive can be found?

I want to study it because it is my study problems in longer time ago.

thx

Ben

  
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