Apart from love, my life had always
reminded me of reality, so standing on my own two feet was not an
option but my destiny.
Since 15, I had worked at many kinds of
part time jobs, such as delivering newspapers at dawn, washing dishes
in restaurants and even laboring at construction sites on
weekends, until I graduated from high school.
Even if I passed the English proficiency
test, that was nothing but a basic test for English study. I was
working and studying simultaneously, and writing tens of thousands of words every month for assignments was almost killing me.
MARKS:
Grammar & Structure - NOT BAD
Expression - GOOD
Cohesion - NOT SO GOOD