We shouldn't always trust Google's statistics.

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Jackson6612  #421313  Thu, 20 Sep 07 12:02 AM

Are the following sentences correct?

We shouldn't always trust Google's statistics. Google indexes all the webpages including those written by non-native speakers. I know you are aware of it, I'm saying this as a precautionary measure for some unwary who accidentally stumble onto this page.

  
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Mister Micawber  #421475  Thu, 20 Sep 07 08:10 AM

We shouldn't always trust Google's statistics. Google indexes all the webpages, including those written by non-native speakers. I know you are aware of this, but I'm saying this as a precautionary measure to help some unwary soul who accidentally stumbles onto this page.


  
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Jackson6612  #421547  Thu, 20 Sep 07 11:27 AM
Thanks a lot, Mr. Micawber.
  
Neeraj Jain  #421572  Thu, 20 Sep 07 12:14 PM

 Mister Micawber wrote:

We shouldn't always trust Google's statistics. Google indexes all the webpages, including those written by non-native speakers. I know you are aware of this, but I'm saying this as a precautionary measure to help some unwary soul who accidentally stumbles onto this page.

some should be replaced by "any". What do you say?

  
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Mister Micawber  #421631  Thu, 20 Sep 07 02:21 PM

Actually, 'some' is better than 'any' here, since the writer evidently expects ('a precautionary measure') someone to appear.

  
Feathers  #422155  Fri, 21 Sep 07 07:14 PM

 Mister Micawber wrote:

 I know you are aware of this, but I'm saying this as a precautionary measure to help some unwary soul who accidentally stumbles onto this page.


Hello MM,

Your correction reminds me of something I ever wanted to know about but was reluctant to ask.  May I ask what kind of impression you'd get of the following sentences, assuming that they are used in the same given context?

#1. I know you are aware of this, but I'm saying this as a precautionary measure..

#2. I know you are aware of that, but I'm saying this as a precautionary measure..

#3. I know you are aware of it, but I'm saying this as a precautionary measure..

I just want to know the first impression natives get.  (For example... does #3 show that the writer is non-native?)

I'll appreciate any input.  Thank you, in advance.
  
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Mister Micawber  #422306  Sat, 22 Sep 07 06:13 AM

All of yours are native and common.  I see no practical difference between this and that;  I find it a little different, in that it seems to me to refer to less complex referents-- that is why I changed it to this in the original sentence. Compare:

I'm happy, and I find it/this/that unusual.
I went to the circus and met an old friend of mine in the bleachers, and I find this/that serendipitous.


  
Feathers  #422386  Sat, 22 Sep 07 03:40 PM
 Mister Micawber wrote:

All of yours are native and common.  I see no practical difference between this and that;  I find it a little different, in that it seems to me to refer to less complex referents-- that is why I changed it to this in the original sentence. Compare:

I'm happy, and I find it/this/that unusual.
I went to the circus and met an old friend of mine in the bleachers, and I find this/that serendipitous.


Thank you for your help, MM!  I guess I've been using only "it" in those cases, no matter to what I was referring readers, but I noticed that small change from it to this made a fairly big difference.  With this, the original sentence flows much better. 

I'm glad that the rule is not so complicated Smile [:)]

Have a happy Autumn Equinox Day!  Hope you're enjoying cooler weather now Smile [:)]

  
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