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Ariya  +  457174 Wed, 26 Dec 07 01:50 PM

Hello All,

Please kindly review and comment this letter below.

Thank you  so much,

Ariya

26 December 2007

 

The Nursing Manager

Prince Alfred Hospital

 

 

Re: Leave Application

Dear Madam,

 

This is to inform you that my family and I have been going through intense mental stress for a while, due to living separately in different countries. I believe that this is the right moment for me to apply for my husband and son to immigrate to Australia and to end this misery once for all.

 

For this reason, I would like to request for a leave of six weeks, which will include two weeks of annual leave and four weeks of unpaid leave. Would you be so kind in approving my leave, which will be from 01 March 2007 to 06 April 2007? I will be in Jakarta during this time and hopefully, I will be able to come back to Australia with my family before the end of my leave.

 

Thank you in advance for your compassionate and understanding in this matter.

 

 

Yours faithfully,

 

Mega
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Feebs11  +  457339 Wed, 26 Dec 07 11:15 PM

26 December 2007

 

The Nursing Manager

Prince Alfred Hospital

 

 

Re: Leave Application

Dear Madam,


I have been working in Australia for the past [period of time], while my husband and son have remained in [name of country]. We now feel it is time for them to apply for immigration to Australia as the strains of separation have been causing us problems.

 

For this reason, I would like to request  leave of six weeks, which will include two weeks of annual leave and four weeks of unpaid leave. Would you be so kind as to approve my leave, which will be from 01 March 2007 to 06 April 2007? I will be in Jakarta during this time and, hopefully, I will be able to come back to Australia with my family before the end of my leave.

 

I hope this will not be a problem, and thank you in advance for your consideration.

 

 

Yours faithfully,

 

Mega

If at all possible, it will be better to have the name of the Nursing Manager and address her by name.
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Ariya  +  457350 Thu, 27 Dec 07 12:41 AM

Dear Feebs11,

Thank you so much for correcting my letter.

The letter flows much better.

Best Regards,

Ariya. 
Ariya
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