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Latest post Tue, Nov 25 2008 8:32 PM by Jemmali. 2 replies.
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Jemmali  +  594435 Tue, 25 Nov 08 04:46 PM
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In order to improve my English, I post this essay and I wish if someone kindly read it and give me some corrections and comments, thanks. 

Nowadays, seen peoples (men, women and even children) smoking became more and more usual in all the glob nevertheless dangers that may causes towards health and personal budget.  

   With the regards to the all damages that caused by smoking towards the humans health (smoking is considered like a long time suicide), we cannot speak about its advantages accept these benefits collected by governments by imposing a tax on tobacco.

  What is so incomprehensible with this habit is that the majorities of smokers are informed about the danger of smoking and its effects but they still persist in practicing it. By the way, what are the raisons that make these peoples in addiction for smoking?

  From many scientists, addiction to smoking is not only caused  by a chemicals ingredients existing in the cigarette ( ex : Nicotine, Ammoniac,…etc) , but also  it can be a result of  some personal wrongs  behaviors  coming  for example from a  lack of responsibility or from a feeling  of to be different  from others.

  Even more smoking can be practice in order to stay thin, no doubt it is a wrong believe.

Finally, every one should keep in mind that smoking in the public area we harm not only ourselves but also we committing a crime on the freedom and on the health of others.   

 

 

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ayumiyoshi1314  +  594482 Tue, 25 Nov 08 05:35 PM

Jemmali
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In order to improve my English, I post this essay and I wish if someone kindly read it and give me some corrections and comments, thanks. 

Nowadays, seen peoples (men, women and even children) smoking became more and more usual in all the glob nevertheless dangers that may causes towards health and personal budget.  

   With the regards to the all damages that caused by smoking towards the humans health (smoking is considered like a long time suicide), we cannot speak about its advantages accept these benefits collected by governments by imposing a tax on tobacco.

  What is so incomprehensible with this habit is that the majorities of smokers are informed about the danger of smoking and its effects but they still persist in practicing it. By the way, what are the raisons that make these peoples in addiction for smoking?

  From many scientists, addiction to smoking is not only caused  by a chemicals ingredients existing in the cigarette ( ex : Nicotine, Ammoniac,…etc) , but also  it can be a result of  some personal wrongs  behaviors  coming  for example from a  lack of responsibility or from a feeling  of to be different  from others.

  Even more smoking can be practice in order to stay thin, no doubt it is a wrong believe.

Finally, every one should keep in mind that smoking in the public area we harm not only ourselves but also we committing a crime on the freedom and on the health of others.   

 

 



Nowadays I have seen people, including men women and children, having that bad habit and addiction of smoking. It is becoming more and more prevalent in all of our globe.
This causes many health problems to the lungs, tongue, throat and other areas of the body.

Jammali, this would probably be a better opening for your topicSmile. I hope you succeed in your englishYes.
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Jemmali  +  594645 Tue, 25 Nov 08 08:32 PM
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Thank you
ayumiyoshi1314Phew
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