Hi Belly
Here are some additional comments.
| "You can avoid the risk of obsesity when you take in less food" |
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Here are some alternatives:
"You can avoid becoming obese if you eat sensibly."
"You can avoid obsesity if you don't overeat."
| "If I can change one important thing about my country, I would improve
the quality of the roads, there are too much potholes on the street. " |
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Your sentence needs a few corrections (but the word 'thing' should not be made plural):
"If I
could change one important thing about my country, I would improve
the quality of the roads
-- there are too
many potholes."
| Does this sentence sound right:" Too many people have lost their lives as well as properties in that deluge?" |
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No, your sentence is awkward. It sounds as though only dead people lost property. How about this instead:
"That deluge has resulted in too much loss of life and property."