A couple of suggestions for you to consider:
He cannot make a judgment from the outside. 1. In AmE, "cannot" and "can not" are used interchangeably. You could also use "can't" (usually in a more informal setting).
2. In AmE, "judgment" is usually spelled without the "e" (don't ask me why, it just is!).
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3. In reading the sentence, I would like a tad more information about "the outside." The outside of what? The outside of a court case (or) the outside of a courtroom, for example?
He had a thrilled expression on his face. 1. The sentence looks fine to me.
2. To simplify one could say, "He looked thrilled."