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Maverick_basu  #204300  Wed, 08 Mar 06 10:24 AM
Dear Sir or Madam,
 
In response to your advertisement in www........ for the position of ........... , I have attached my resume for your consideration.
 
I have around 5 years of experience in customer service. I was privileged to work for a number of fortune companies like IBM, HSBC, GE Capital and Convergys. The attached CV describes my skills more in detail.
 
If my skills are of interest to you, please contact me by email at ddd@ggg.com">dddd@ggg.com or call me at 2637388 / 04456433 to discuss possible employment opportunities within your company. Thank you in advance for your consideration.  I look forward to hearing from you.
 
Sincerely,
 
zyd gtd
Oxford, England
ddd@ggg.com">dddd@ggg.com
Ph: 0456456 / 0564564567
  
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Nick147  #204336  Wed, 08 Mar 06 01:15 PM

Hi Maverick, here is the letter tidied up a little:

- Nick

In response to your advertisement in www........ for the position of ........... , I attach my resumé for your consideration.

 

I have 5 years of experience in customer service, including work for IBM, HSBC, GE Capital and Convergys. The attached CV describes my skills in more detail.

 

If my experience is of interest to you, please contact me by email at ddd@ggg.com">dddd@ggg.com or call me on 2637388 / 04456433.

 

Thank you in advance for your consideration.  I look forward to hearing from you.

 

Sincerely,

  
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