Please somebody review my "After Job Interview Letter"

Hi There!!!,

I am a graduate south American engineer searching for an entry position. I would like somebody review my letter. I had the job interview last week. Pro : I felt connection with the interviewer (my future boss). He liked I have energy and that I am coming from another country where the people work very hard. Con: he thought that I would need some time to update my technical knowledge.

Thanks in Advance,
RRVE

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Mr. XXBoss,

I am excited about your job offer, and I am confident that my learning skills, electronic background, knowledge, and experience of international telecommunication practices will help you achieve your objectives and will allow me to expand my knowledge, skills and satisfied my ambitions. I know small companies are risky but with good managment and high-qualify staff you can growth as far as you can imagine. Therefore, working in this very productive country in this entry position would be a unique opportunity I will always apreciatte.

I look forward to discussing a possible professional affiliation with Action Company.

Thanks for your consideration,

Yours Sincerely,

RRVE


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