Hi,
I woke up in cold sweat and sat straight up in our bed, and touched the side of my face. It had all been a dream or a nightmare. Moonbeams filtered through our curtains casting a soft light in the room.
My husband lay on his side, snoring blissfully, unaware of my trouble dream. I snuggled close, breathing in his minted fresh breath. My hands ruffled his black hair, and I snuzzled his ear. "I love you." He muttered in his sleep, and tossed one arm around me. Lying back against the pillow, I whispered, "Father, thank you for revealing to me what you want me to know."
Here are a few more edits.
I woke up in
a (we usually say 'a', treating 'sweat' as a countable noun that refers to all the sweat on a particular person's body.) cold sweat and sat straight up in our bed, and touched the side of my face. It had all been a dream or a nightmare. Moonbeams filtered through our curtains
, casting a soft light in the room.
My husband lay on his side, snoring blissfully, unaware of my trouble
d dream. I snuggled close, breathing in his minted fresh breath. My hands ruffled his black hair, and I
nuzzled his ear. "I love you." He muttered in his sleep, and tossed one arm around me. Lying back against the pillow, I whispered, "Father, thank you for revealing to me what you want me to know."
The sentence 'My husband lay . . .. ' is fine as written.
Best wishes, Clive