pls someone correct my english -Thanks

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Anonymous  #381454  Tue, 19 Jun 07 12:27 PM


Hope you are well .

As we talked , I attcehed my CV . I will appreciated if you find me a placement there
 
Kind Regards

  
Yankee  #381467  Tue, 19 Jun 07 01:29 PM

Here is a suggestion:

Thank you for taking the time to discuss placement with me.
As we discussed, I am attaching my CV .
Your assistance in finding a placement for me is greatly appreciated.
 
Kind regards

  
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