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deer  #48996  Mon, 04 Oct 04 08:34 PM
hello all


my question

You have an English friend called Lee. You are both going to another friend’s birthday party next week.

Write an e-mail to Lee. In your e-mail, you should

· Say how you will get there
· Suggest you go together
· Ask him for advice about a present.

Write 35-45 on your answer sheet.



my writting

Dear Lee

We will go to friend’s birthday party next week by car. I would like to go with you to party and make interesting there with friend’s.
I advice with we going to him party and buy quitter for him .

Love,
deer
  
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anon1  #48997  Mon, 04 Oct 04 08:51 PM

Dear Lee

We will go to friend’s birthday party next week by car. I would like to go with you to party and make interesting there with friend’s.
I advice with we going to him party and buy quitter for him .

Love,
deer



Lee,

I suggest we go to Donald's party next Tuesday. I will come by your house at 7 p.m. on Tuesday and then we can go in my car to Donald's house.

Do you have any ideas what we should bring him for a present?

Your friend,
Deer
  
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deer  #49088  Tue, 05 Oct 04 12:53 PM
Thank you very much
  
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