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Latest post Wed, Dec 27 2006 7:59 PM by LEakey. 0 replies.
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LEakey  +  307844 Wed, 27 Dec 06 07:59 PM

Hello everybody,

I'm fresh here. This is my first time to post here.

I need help about my motivation letter. I just finished it, but I think it's better to have someone else correct my syntax and grammar since English is not my native language.

Thanx very much guys!!!

LEakey

Below you can find the letter:

Dear Mr.< ...>,

 

 

As an undergraduate industrial engineer in electronics, I am going to continue further education in engineering after finishing my programme in Leuven Engineering School. When I was in Beijing Jiaotong university in China, taking my first bachelor year programme in electronics, I had already learned of <.....>(name of university). After finishing the first year in China, I went to Leuven Engineering School in Belgium to continue the rest three years as an exchange student, major in electronic engineering. I think <...> is a perfect place for engineers to study further in their own fields, especially in electrical engineering and information and communication technology in my own perspective.

Being a diligent and creative engineer with wide range of knowledge in electronics, I am able to either work on my own or be a good team member in a group. Based on all the key areas of knowledge and skills I have learned and also extensive engineering projects I have done in Leuven Engineering School, I think they would help me a lot to follow the programme, system-on-chip design. In addition, I am doing my final thesis in Agilent Technologies Belgium, which is a multinational measurement company with advancing electronics as the main business. Through this particular thesis, I have learned a lot of HDL programming and circuit design based on FPGA. All the aspects above make me feel being qualified for the programme I apply for.

Being accepted for this programme, there would be many opportunities of either finding employment in a great variety of industries or continuing further research career.

After you have reviewed my enclosed resume, I would appreciate it very much if you could consider me as a good candidate for the programme. I can be reached by phone at any time after 2 p.m. daily at <....>.

 

 

Yours sincerely,

<......>

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