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Anonymous  #289205  Sat, 04 Nov 06 11:52 AM
Hey,

Can someon have a look at my cover letter? Any comments and suggestions are more then welcome.

Kind regards, and thanks,

Muerten

Cover letter:

Dear recruitment commission,


I would like to apply for the research position in social policy (reference number: ***). I became acquainted with the research vacancy through the University of *** website.
 

The educational record I present is one of going from practice to theory. After having received a BA in Social Work, I continued studying in the Masters in *** course, as such deepening my knowledge in social policy, in a European, comparative context.
 

My research experience thus far focussed on the gender topic and the influencing factors on the trade union strategy. In the performance of this research I conducted, analysed interviews (structured and semi structured), questionnaires and a content analysis of different magazines. This research experience has lead to experience in the usage of different research techniques, in qualitative and quantitative research.
 

The research in the reform of the National Health Service as a public service is an interesting research project in which I can make a valuable contribution. I am eager to learn and motivated to contribute to this project. Other foreign experiences (Finland, South Africa) thought me that I am flexible and persistent in getting the result desired. Next to this I am a team - player and easily to get along with.
 

Considering my qualifications, interest and motivation, I very much hope that you will consider me for the research associate in social policy position.

Yours faithfully,


  
Widget  #290479  Wed, 08 Nov 06 03:13 AM

I have made some corrections in red:

I would like to apply for the Research Position in Social Policy (reference number: ***). I became acquainted with this vacancy through the University of *** website.
 

The educational record I present is one of going from practice to theory[maybe this should read 'theory to practice'?  I'm not sure]. After having received a BA in Social Work, I continued studying for a Masters in *** , thereby deepening my knowledge of social policy in a European comparative context.
 

My research experience thus far has focussed on the gender topic and the influencing factors in trade union strategy. During the course of my research  I analysed interviews (structured and semi structured) and questionnaires, and performed content analyses of different magazines. This research experience has given me experience in the usage of different research techniques in qualitative and quantitative research.
 

The research in the reform of the National Health Service as a public service is an interesting research project in which I can make a valuable contribution. I am eager to learn and motivated to contribute to this project. Foreign experience (in Finland and South Africa) has taught me that I am flexible and persistent in getting the results desired. I am also a team- player and easy to get along with.
 

Considering my qualifications, interest and motivation, I very much hope that you will consider me for the Research Associate in Social Policy position.

  
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Anonymous  #291881  Sat, 11 Nov 06 03:58 PM

Dear recruitment commission,


I would like to apply for the research associate position in social policy (reference number: ***). I came to know about the vacancy through the University of *** website.
 

The educational record I present, is the one of going from theory to practice. After having received a BA in Social Work, I continued Masters studies in *** course, deepening my knowledge in social policy, in an European comparative context.
 

My research experience has been focussed on the gender topic, and the factors influencing trade union strategy. While performing this research I conducted, analysed interviews (structured and semi structured), prepared questionnaires, and analyzed content of different magazines. This research has given experience in using different qualitative and quantitative research techniques.
 

The research in reforming the National Health Service as a public service is an exciting project in which I can make a valuable contribution. I am eager to learn and am motivated to contribute. Other foreign experiences (Finland, South Africa) has thought me that I am flexible and persistent in getting the desired result. Next to this, I am a team player and easily to get along.
 

Considering my qualifications, interest and motivation, I very much hope that you will consider me for the research associate in social policy position.

Yours faithfully,

  
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