Can someone please have a quick look at my cover letter? Many thanks !

Omitina wrote:

Hey guys,   Thanks in advance for taking your time to read my cover letter.  I just need another person to read it and see if there is any mistakes.    THANKS ONCE AGAIN!   -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------     Dear Edward:  [Unless you know him well, use his title and surname: Mr Smith,]   I wish to be considered for the Junior Accountant position with your organisation.   I am a motivated and hard working professional, and currently in my final year studies at the University of XYZ. In July next year I expect to graduate with a Bachelor of Commerce degree, with double major in accounting and business management and minor in professional accounting.   As part of my accounting major, I recently completed the subject “Company Accounting”, which has provided me the fundamental knowledge and understanding of what commercial accounting entails, as well as a broad overview of the implications in accounting standards apply to different type of businesses. I am confident that I can apply my exceptional research and analytical skills to the work environment.   To supplement my studies, I am actively involved in a university club as the secretary for Students In Free Enterprise (SIFE), which is an international non-profit organisation that provides students with the opportunities to make positive impacts on/within the community by creating outreach projects. In addition, I have obtained casual work as a student ambassador at my university. From the above experiences, I have developed exceptional skills in networking, communication, and organisation. I am ready to embark on a career in the accounting profession with the desire to apply my fundamental accounting knowledge to develop further my skills and experience.   Please feel free to contact me any time on *******or email me at 123@com, thank you for considering my application and I look forward to hearing from you.   Yours sincerely,   *E***